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Whispers in the shadows by ~Succubus6669:iconSuccubus6669:



The whispers in the shadows,
whispered promises all these years
but now it seems these promises have turned themselves into tears.

A promise gone forever,
a friendship lies at stake,
the memories of our love
are keeping me awake.

like claws your words dig deep into my soul,
leaving wounds that I never thought I would feel,
Because of what you meant to me, because of what we've been through
I have to wonder now, if these wounds can ever heal...

Now I lie in confusion,
waiting for the darkness to take over
waiting to see your face no more,
waiting for the day when I will no longer wake.

Whyfor have you done this?
what is it I have done...
to make it so I have now become,
to you - No one.
©2008-2009 ~Succubus6669
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Author's Comments

Hopefully the person this is written for will figure it out...

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:icondragonic-saga:
It definately says 'song lyrics' to me... I'm thinking either Demon Hunter style, or maybe Evanescence... i like the last stanza ^^

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I've come to the conclusion that my mind is being remote controlled from Neptune. How do I know this, you ask? Why, from the incredibly long information signal delay of course...
:iconsuccubus6669:
kool, thnx

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Tod ist nur der Anfang.
:icontiger-girl:
I agree. ^-^ Song lyrics for sure. :hug: I hope things work hun.

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"Don't settle for the one you can live with, wait for the one you can't live without." Victoria Richards January 21 1989- December 6 2006
"If you can't be yourself, then no one can trust you as your always lying." Me!
:iconsuccubus6669:
Thnx

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Tod ist nur der Anfang.
:iconkuratasana:
It's really good, Jenna! It's been ages since I've seen you post anything! :wow:

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Check out my new account :iconmiss-mae: if you want to see my new art. :)
:iconsuccubus6669:
it has been ages since I've had the motivation to write. :) thnx though. I've been told that it seems more like song lyrics..like demon hunter or something

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Tod ist nur der Anfang.

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